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So far away

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I simply cannot wait
To be around you
to hold your hand
To tell you how much you mean
My muse, my dearest

To bring you close and breathe your scent
Your soft caress
The peak,
The summit
Height of desire

The mere thought of you
With another man
The sheer pain of this imagination
Nails within every muscle in my chest
Drives me to sadism and violence
The rage boiling just beneath the surface

The pure, calm waters of love
Hide the raging tempest of jealousy
I cannot wish for anything but to be with you
So far away
Possibly one of the most personal poems I've ever written, though I'm not too convinced it's one of my better ones...
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jerryfrencho's avatar
That twist right in the middle like the insertion of a knife; very good. I can feel the angst. You have a way of leading the reader one way and then suddenly going another way. Nice technique. I really like your work as I've said before, but it bears saying again.